<p>Decision: Deferred</p>
<p>Objective:
SAT I (breakdown): 2210 - 720 CR 800 M 690 W
ACT (breakdown): 35 - 33 E 35 M 36 R 34 S
SAT II: 800 Math II, 800 Physics
Unweighted GPA (out of 4.0): 3.96
Rank (percentile if rank is unavailable: 23/798
AP (place score in parenthesis): Physics B (5), English Lang (5), US History (4), World History (4)
IB (place score in parenthesis):
Senior Year Course Load: Varsity Swimming (Two Blocks); AP Calc BC; AP Physics C: Mech; AP Gov; AP English Lit; AP Spanish Lang; AP Physics C: E&M; AP Macroeconomics
Major Awards (USAMO, Intel etc.): National Merit Commended, AP Scholar with Honor. Besides that just a lot of local awards.</p>
<p>Subjective:</p>
<p>Extracurriculars (place leadership in parenthesis): Varsity and club swimming (Captain 11-12), Science UIL, multi-instrumentalist (8), a lot of church related activities, involvement with a local Christian day camp.
Job/Work Experience: CIT and Assistant Counselor at local Christian day camp.
Volunteer/Community Service: Church, NHS (VP), mission trips
Summer Activities: Swimming, working at day camp, mission trip in Spain.
Essays (rating 1-10, details): CommonApp wrote about how I felt most content while in 100 degree weather with screaming 5 year olds at that day camp and what I’ve gained from it (8/10). Yale Supplement wrote about my work ethic and used a farming metaphor to describe it. May have been to much tell and not enough show. I honestly don’t know how to rate this one, that’s up to admissions. Short takes were good. I tried to sound spontaneous, but I don’t think they made me stand out or anything.
Recommendations (rating 1-10, details):</p>
<p>Teacher Rec #1: 11th grade English teacher, didn’t read, but I know I was one of her favorite students.
Teacher Rec #2: 11th grade physics teacher. Said a lot of good stuff about me, but he isn’t the best writer. Hope that they don’t take writing skill of recommenders into consideration. 8 without skill considered, 6 with.
Counselor Rec: Didn’t read. I’m at a large public high school, so she doesn’t know me too well.
Additional Rec: My youth pastor. Didn’t read, but I know he always has good stuff to say about me, and I hope he didn’t try to sound too formal, cause he has a really charismatic voice.
Interview: Eh. Wasn’t bad, wasn’t good. Didn’t sell myself as much as I could have.</p>
<p>Other</p>
<p>Applied for Financial Aid?: Yes
Intended Major: Physics
State (if domestic applicant): TX
Country (if international applicant):
School Type: Large public, about 800 per class. Surprisingly competitive compared to surrounding schools.
Ethnicity: White
Gender: Male
Income Bracket: Around 100K
Hooks (URM, first generation college, etc.): Athlete. Not recruited, but I have contact with the coach and he wants me to swim for Yale. </p>
<p>Reflection</p>
<p>Strengths: Test scores, essays (I think?), interest and proficiency in science.
Weaknesses: Grades (My freshman year of high school I didn’t have motivation, and I had a bad run with my English teacher my sophomore year), lack of awards, lack of hooks.
Why you think you were accepted/deferred/rejected: I think I failed to “Wow” the admissions officers. I think I was a fully qualified applicant, and I hoped that my correspondence with the swim coach would help give me get over that thin line that separates accepted and deferred, but looks like it didn’t. Maybe he can help me with RD, still, though
Where else were you accepted/deferred/rejected: Accepted to UT’s physics’ program! I’ll have to wait another 4 months-ish to know about any other schools though. </p>
<p>General Comments: I’d be lying if I said I wasn’t disappointed, but I’m looking on the bright side. Congrats to those accepted, and hopefully in April I’ll be an official Bulldog, too! If not, worst case scenario is that I end up at UT, which isn’t even that bad, haha. I’m lucky either way.</p>