Yale essay! QUICK HELP!

<p>LAST ESSAY</p>

<p>its the yale required essay</p>

<p>if someone could quickly read it and comment that'd be sooo great</p>

<p>realllly quick!</p>

<p>I can... I've already submitted my yale app.</p>

<p>wanna trade? I have a CMU essay and a cornell CALS essay</p>

<p>I'll read tonight..</p>