<p>I'd love for someone to read and critique my Yale essay. It was written somewhat last minute, and I need to see if it makes sense and sounds good. Feel free to be harsh, and please PM me as soon as possible--it's due tonight. Thanks!</p>
<p>--> for those of you who do read it, I placed asterisks around the parts I think are a little sketchy.</p>
<p>I'd love to trade... I just scribbled mine out in the last hour or so, and I think it might be horribly unclear.</p>
<p>Hello! I'm also writing for Yale, but I have not started on my <500 word essay yet. Ugh. So much for the countdown partying..</p>
<p>I'm guessing that EST is -5, so the whole application for Yale will be due in a little less than 5 hours, am I correct? I really don't want to send in my application late - and I still don't know if I want to apply there at all.</p>
<p>I'll read. I'm all done with college apps =)</p>
<p>I'll take a look at it. I'm done too ! (and not applying to Yale)</p>
<p>Thanks so much to those who took a look at it! Anyone else? I fixed the sketchy parts, so now I'd love a quick, overall edit.</p>
<p>I'll be happy to look and edit if you send it right away because I'm going out......</p>
<p>Question- this is the additional essay, no?</p>
<p>I'll read if you want... I've already submitted my Yale app.</p>
<p>I'll read tonight..
I will warn you though, I am quite harsh.</p>