<p>Yes, I know there's a separate forum for college essays, but I wanted current Yale students to read and critique the essays I'll most likely be using to apply to Yale. </p>
<p>Let me know if you'd be willing to help me!</p>
<p>Thanks!</p>
<p>Anyone?! Please help!</p>
<p>aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa</p>
<p>No comment.</p>
<p>I'll see if I can help. PM me.</p>
<p>I'd love to help. Also gives me a chance to see other people's common ap essays. PM me.</p>
<p>I'd love to read them and give you some critical feedback... PM me</p>
<p>would any yale students like to read my essay?!</p>
<p>Joyogunx PM me if you want. Beware that I'll be very tough in order to try to help you improve but that's the way I roll...</p>
<p>^ Agreed, but yalie343 is very helpful! ;)</p>
<p>I just edited joyogunx's essay, and was very harsh lol. (I treated it like a college-level essay joyogunx) Please, can somebody else give her a second opinion?</p>
<p>yah, you weren't lying when you were tough. :/
but i probably needed it.</p>