250 Word in Need of Readers

College Essays
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<p>Only those who have already been through the application process please (getting a bit paranoid now that I'm onto the supplements).</p>

<p>This is a U of M supplement in response to the following prompt:
Everyone belongs to many different communities and/or groups defined by (among other things) shared geography, religion, ethnicity, income, cuisine, interest, race, ideology, or intellectual heritage. Choose one of the communities to which you belong, and describe that community and your place within it.</p>

<p>I'm looking for feedback on my chosen topic and the overall quality of the essay. Thanks!</p>

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<p>Anyone? It’s not the worst thing I’ve ever read…</p>

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<p>Take an opportunity to let off some built up criticisms, I won’t be offended</p>

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<p>Ill be happy to read yours and give you some feedback.
I must admit that I am only a high school senior, but i guess a different opinion doesnt hurt:D
im applying U of M too!</p>

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<p>sure pm it over :)</p>

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<p>Thanks so much! Anyone else care to read?</p>

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<p>ya sure! 10char</p>