<p>Dear CC Parents,
For many years, I have set my sights on one dream school in particular. Unfortunately, so have a lot of other people. It is among the most selective in the nation, and I ended up being rejected last year. However, I was fortunate enough to obtain admission to another school (on the opposite coast) of comparable caliber. Perhaps naively I suppose, I have not given up hope on my original dream and decided to apply as a transfer. The application is due at the end of the week, and I have finished the essays. However, since I am no longer in high school, there arent guidance counselors to read my admissions essays. I was wondering if one or two parents out there would be willing to look over what I have written and offer any feedback they might have?</p>
<p>If you PM me your essay, I'll read it. Good luck!</p>