<p>I am trying to aim for the stars here with my school choices. Would anyone wanna read and edit/critique my essay for me? A few people already did, but I want more criticisms :) dont be afraid to TEAR. IT. APART.</p>
<p>I will PM it to anyone who is willing.</p>
<p>OR email, if you prefer that more.</p>
<p>TIA</p>
<p>It is for the common app btw. I am mainly trying to get into UPenn and Cornell with it.</p>
<p>You can PM me and we can share your essays for some feedback from each other. I really need someone to read my essay</p>
<p>I’d love to give you a hand. PM me :)</p>
<p>I’d be happy to read and critique your essay</p>
<p>I’d love to help. PM me</p>
<p>I’ll peer edit it for you if you PM it to me.</p>
<p>PM me and i’ll give you feed back</p>
<p>I’d love to try, even though I’m pretty new at this. Maybe we can exchange to peer edit each others’.</p>
<p>I’ve edited a few of my friends essays, one of which is also applying to UPenn :), I can give some constructive criticism if that is what you are looking for. PM me</p>
<p>Could I send you mine as well?</p>
<p>I’ll read it.</p>
<p>id like to read it</p>
<p>Would be happy to help.</p>
<p>PM me. happy to help!</p>
<p>PM me and I’ll be happy to help.</p>
<p>i’ll help with editing</p>
<p>I could help as well. PM would be good for me.</p>
<p>happy to review the work of my peer’s.</p>
<p>I’ll read it.</p>
<p>PM me and I’ll review it.</p>