Can someone read my UPENN ESSAY NOW? plz?

Colleges and Universities A-Z University of Pennsylvania
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<p>Hi!</p>

<p>I would be really really reaaally glad if someone would proof read my "Why Penn" essay right now? I have an hour before I will upload it!</p>

<p>thank you so much!</p>

<p>If not, thank you once again! ^^</p>

<p>=)</p>

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<p>Sent you a PM.</p>

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<p>Thank you.</p>

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<p>i will read it
i already turned in my app</p>

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<p>If you want I'd be happy to read it and give constructive criticism as well.</p>

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<p>I would be happy to take a look at it and give you hints/comments.
Let me know and PM me the essay.</p>

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<p>I'm happy to critique your essay as well.
Was in your shoes a couple years ago :-)</p>

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<p>PM me the essay. i'd love to critique it.</p>