<p>I was rushing and made 3 word choice/grammatical mistakes on Brown's supplement.
My essay was pretty well written though.</p>
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<li> My curiosity has been FURTHER fueled by brilliant teachers who have allowed me to FURTHER my interest in Biology. <- LOL</li>
<li>Within moments, I noticed an expression of joy on her face as she LIFTED the latest issue of Time magazine. My spirits were LIFTED. (I know, I'm questioning whether I was drunk)</li>
<li>The woman then requested for me open the blinds that were partly shut. (forgot "to" before open)</li>
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<p>So are these enough to reject me from Brown because I'm on the fence? (2140/4.0)</p>