An abstract essay from a Brown hopeful...

College Essays
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<p>Will someone please critique my essay? Just respond and I'll PM it to you. THANK YOU SO MUCH</p>

2

<p>I'll help; PM enderkin and azdx, I've helped them with their essays in the past two weeks.</p>

3

<p>Okay I trust you. I'll PM it to you.</p>

4

<p>I have sent a thorough critique and minor edits to your original piece (I explained why I could not tear it up as I originally intended).</p>

5

<p>Sure PM me</p>

6

<p>I'll take a look.</p>

7

<p>anyone else?</p>

8

<p>Sure, I'd like to look at it.</p>

9

<p>I can look at it as well</p>

10

<p>Send it over, I'll help you out.</p>

11

<p>I'll take a look at it.</p>

12

<p>PM it to me, i'll check it out.</p>