An essay that will touch the bottom of your heart. See if you agree...

College Essays
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<p>My English teacher has done most of the grammar and hard work, so all there is left is:</p>

<p>-pick out any more mistakes(shouldn't be many)
-see if there is anything unclear or not making sense
-give me comments on it, such as how strong this essay is, how much will the college like it, does it answer the prompt, or is it cliche or unique</p>

<p>It is for UCs, so the prompts are:</p>

<p>Essay # 1: Describe the world you come from — for example, your family, community or school — and tell us how your world has shaped your dreams and aspirations.</p>

<p>Essay # 2: Tell us about a personal quality, talent, accomplishment, contribution or experience that is important to you. What about this quality or accomplishment makes you proud and how does it relate to the person you are?</p>

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<p>hehe I’ll read it
PM me</p>

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<p>I’ll read it if we can trade. You give me feedback on mine as well, and it’s supposed to be touching in a sense too.</p>

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<p>I’m a parent and will take a look if you PM it to me.</p>

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<p>i’ll read yours if you read mine</p>

<p>=]</p>

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<p>I am willing to read, just PM your essays over.</p>

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<p>i’ll read it too :slight_smile: pm me</p>

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<p>I am happy to read it and give feedback.</p>

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<p>What? did I just told myself to PM my essay over? that was funny…</p>

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<p>^bahaha, well you have to keep your promises. ;)</p>

<p>I’ll crit if you like! :)</p>

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<p>I have a ‘wooden heart’ and let see your words, pm me pls</p>

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<p>I’ll try to help you out if you’d like. PM me</p>

13

<p>I will be more than glad to take a look and critique it, just PM me.</p>

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<p>add me in too, I’ll give you critical feedback =)</p>

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<p>PM the essay over, and I’ll give you some feedback. :)</p>

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<p>I’ll read - PM me!</p>

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<p>I’m interested</p>

<p>pm me</p>

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<p>I’ll read it, PM me. :)</p>

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<p>i’ll read it, pm</p>