<p>will anyone read my essay and critique it?</p>
<p>the topic is: What factors in your life have led you to your current choice of major or career path?</p>
<p>post here and i'll pm it to you. thanks!</p>
<p>i just finished my second one, so i'll add that one too if people wanna see it. thanks.</p>
<p>the topic is: What decisions and experiences in your life have been most influential in your decision to apply to ____?</p>
<p>also there is a paragraph for "additional optional information"</p>
<p>um sure.. I'll look over it</p>