another "read my essay" topic

Applying to College
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<p>I've been sitting on this essay for at least a month and I have no idea if it's appropriate for an admissions essay or not. So, I really could use a few second opinions. Especially from people who don't know me.</p>

<p>I'm not going Ivy and the three schools I'm applying to (Ohio U, Elon and Miami U) are relatively open about the topics. PM me if you'd like to help me out.</p>

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<p>ill help you!! just PM me!!</p>

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<p>thanks! anyone else?</p>

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<p>PM it to me. I'll try to help, if I have time (really busy...)</p>

<p>Oh, and give me your e-mail address. If I do critique it, I'll e-mail it to you (Word document).</p>

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<p>I'll give it a shot
pm it to me too</p>

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<p>Sure, i'd be happy to</p>

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<p>PM me, too! I'll help ya!</p>