Another Grade my essay please

<p>THanks for the previous insight. Please grade this one too.</p>

<p>What is your opinion of the claim that disagreement leads to progress?</p>

<p>Disagreements are critical for anything to progress. If one aquieseces to everthing, then there will no change and thus, no progress. History has shown us that, even in fields as diverse as science and government, it is disagreements that leadus to improvement.</p>

<p>The field of science was built on the foundations of feuds with scientists trying to prove popular beliefs wrons with various experiments. One of the most well know conflict in science was whether to except the helocentric therory or not. When Copernicus came out and announced that all planets revolved around the sun instead of the Earth, he enraged a beast that for along time shunned science: the church. We, as modern people, know that Copernicus was right, but it was this disagreement that led many, such as Kepler, to test if he is correct. Soon, the truth was revealed and an advancement in astronomy was made. Who knows? Maybe if this disagreement never took happened, humans might still think of Earth as the center of the infinite universe.</p>

<p>On a much more distant area, government has also seen betterment due to friction. Actually, a single agruement has helped shape many of the world's government today. A conflict between an empire and thirteen of its colonies. A feud between the rights of men. A clash for freedom. The disagreement of ideas that caused the American Revolution not only formed and shaped this country, but as a base for many worldwide reforms such as the French Revolution. Even though it did not cause a revolution in human right, this friction did lead to betterment in human rights.</p>

<p>To conclude, history has show us that conflicts can lead us to better ourselves. As Copernicus and the colonists shown in their clashes, disagreements show us what is mistaken and lead us to ameriolate it. And remember, history tends to repeat itself.</p>

<p>Thanks in advance for the reply</p>

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<p>3-4ish- poor structure, many grammar/spelling errors, you don't really support your thesis with your examples</p>