<p>I just finished a rough draft of my common app essay and was hoping some of you brilliant accepted Yale students would take some time from your demanding lives to review my essay, I know that college is starting soon but any help would be appreciated. I can PM you the essay if you are willing. Thanks.</p>
<p>I’ll take a look if you send it before the 27, after, I make no promises</p>
<p>Send it to me…</p>
<p>I’ll take a look too, send it before this Saturday, though. :)</p>
<p>i have sent it to all who posted, thanks for all the help.</p>
<p>You’re better off getting some books for college essays than asking people with very limited (albeit successful) experience – their own.</p>
<p>This might be helpful
<a href=“http://www.virginia.edu/undergradadmission/writingtheessay.html[/url]”>http://www.virginia.edu/undergradadmission/writingtheessay.html</a></p>
<p>T26E4’s probably right, but I’ll offer some critique anyway if you send it to me soon.</p>
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<p>Just going to butt in to say that…it was.</p>