<p>I was wondering if anybody was willing to critique my rough draft college essay</p>
<p>i’ll take a look at it</p>
<p>sure pm me</p>
<p>Pm me if you want</p>
<p>pm me as well!</p>
<p>I’ll slaughter all your hopes and dreams! Ok maybe not but it will be as critical as possible… Pm me</p>
<p>yes i would be brutal because we do not know each other</p>
<p>I’m an English major and I’d be happy to read it over and provide some feedback. PM me.</p>