<p>Hi! I wrote a (really) rough draft version of my essay, which is about an event that has inspired me.</p>
<p>I need harsh critique/suggestions. </p>
<p>Would anyone be willing to look at it? It would be greatly appreciated!
I just feel like I don't know what I'm doing...</p>
<p>I can give it a go</p>
<p>alright great--thanks.</p>
<p>i'l look at it</p>
<p>I can be brutal, no mercy, but go ahead</p>
<p>I'm with Potatohead8. I'm incredibly brutal, but I also look at the positive aspects and all. Give it a whirl.</p>
<p>it wont send as a PM at the moment, but I'll try again tomorrow--thanks so much</p>