Any parents willing to proof my common app essay?

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<p>I'd be really grateful! :)</p>

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<p>Bump ! :)</p>

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<p>Maybe just one read? :P</p>

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<p>PM to me with your email address.</p>

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<p>sent, thanks jmmom. Anyone else? :)</p>

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<p>pm to me...i'll have ma look over.</p>

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<p>I'll look at it to, if you email it</p>

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<p><a href="mailto:jack_frost429@hotmail.com">jack_frost429@hotmail.com</a>
i am not a parent, but i am in university right now, i'd be happy to look at yours :)</p>