<p>I have an essay for UT Austin transfer essay and need some work into making it more "cohesive" and structured and adding/editing things to make it seem better. Any takers? I am willing to read yours and give you my opinion.</p>
<p>Everyone wants their essay read but no one can spare a few minutes to read someone else’s eh?</p>
<p>BUMP</p>
<p>I’ll read it and give feedback.
I am a parent and have been helping some kids around here with summer program essays. I find it quite interesting.</p>
<p>Have you finished/sent your essay? If not PM it to me.</p>