<p>title says it all. My english teacher says she thinks its really good, but she doesn't know what Yale will think when reading it - we're both going on our gut here, since its nothing award winning, but i feel it conveys something important. Any1 willing to comment on it? no 09ers please, I'd really prefer Yalies.</p>
<p>please pm me it</p>
<p>sure pm it</p>
<p>sure, pm me.</p>
<p>^ all these people have less than 50 posts and chances are, not yalies. I would suggest finding a more trusted individual</p>
<p>Have you won awards/been published with other poems? That's the kind of independent analysis of my talents I'd want before submitting a poem. Your teacher may not know about Yale discouraging supplemental material or be savvy about the application process when she recommends that you submit it. If poetry or writing is a major piece of who you are, you probably have stuff on your activities/awards list to prove it without submitting the poem.</p>
<p>Yeah, disast, i didn't. I'll just go on my gut feeling</p>