anybody interested to look at my Cornell transfer essay??

College Essays
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<p>hey guys! I am stressing out here......4 more days to go till deadline for Cornell, but I am stuck on this essay for CAS that I have been writing for a month now.....it requires me to
"discuss a quotation or personal motto that reflects your values and beliefs and tells us something about the kind of person you are" </p>

<p>Would anyone experienced like to read my essays, and show me what I could improve? I think I tried to put too much in there, and lost my focus..... Thank you so much in advance!</p>

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<p>i can't say i'm experienced, but i'll still try to help.</p>

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<p>Sure thing</p>

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<p>i'll read it</p>

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<p>Sure, email me at <a href="mailto:RayAllen333@gmail.com">RayAllen333@gmail.com</a> with college confidential as subject please. Good luck!</p>

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<p>I thought cornells deadline was a month ago?????????</p>

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<p>Hey.. I applied to Cornell as well was curious to read your essay. Send it over if you want.</p>

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<p>"I thought cornells deadline was a month ago?????????"</p>

<p>You need to buy a calendar. The question was asked on 03/28/2008 and the deadline was on 03/31/08</p>

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<p>send it over</p>

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<p>I’ll read it and comment on what it lacks and what is good about it. I won’t edit grammar or do sentence restructuring. If you want me to look at it, just pm me. Just so you know, I am also applying for Cornell trasnfer. Good luck!</p>

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<p>you guys realize, he applied 2 years ago right</p>

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<p>OMG! can the applier tell us the result now?</p>