Anybody willing to give me some advice on my NYU essays?

[onedragon]

<p>Thans a lot on helping</p>

[oliviabartel]

<p>I’ll help! I’m applying to NYU too I’ve completed my essay’s but I could have used some help with mine because they were HARD.</p>

[sharonm]

<p>I can help out, if you’d like. Email would be preferable.</p>