Feedback on my essays for NYU?

I know it’s late for any changes, but I might as well ask for feedback in order to know what impression my essays will give admissions officers. I applied to NYUAD ED2 and was nominated, so I made three essays. Anyone who would like to give any feedback would be rather appreciated. I’m curious as to whether they’re strong.
Would anybody be willing to help me with this? I’ll PM those who wish.
In exchange, I’m willing to help anyone who has similar requests.

PM me. Not the best but I’ll give it a shot.

I think I’m done with applications so no requests for me

PM me

PM me I applied NYUAD ED1 (with a nomination) this year and was accepted, I might be able to help :slight_smile:

I’d be happy to!

You can PM me as well!