<p>hi i've completely rewritten my essay for the 2nd UC prompt and I need people to revise it ASAP please. tell me if you're interested and i will PM it to you. please i need readers asap because the deadline is tomorrow! </p>
<p>Also, one problem that i already noticed in my essay is that i don't really have a strong ending. if you have any suggestions to improve my ending then please share!</p>
<p>Sure I can read it.</p>
<p>send it on over.</p>
<p>i will read it...</p>
<p>sure i just got done doing this for my cousin lol</p>
<p>hey i need more readers please, i still feel that a lot of changes can be made to my essay</p>
<p>bump~</p>
<p>please i really need more ppl to read my essay!</p>
<p>PM it to me.</p>
<p>sure no problem</p>
<p>bumping again~</p>
<p>calling all readers!</p>
<p>send me! in return, can u just look @ mine? lol</p>
<p>Pm it to me too I'll read it!:)</p>
<p>PM me and I'll read it. Can you read mine, too?</p>
<p>Zara, PM me yours.</p>
<p>NeplusUltra can i send my essay to you so you can revise it also?</p>
<p>i need really harsh critiquers to read my essay now, just cause it's EXTREMELY last minute!</p>
<p>me too! I'm pretty solid in grammar, and I can critique harshly. I'm going crazy because I'm doing this way too last minute. Anyone want to swap?</p>
<p>any other harsh critiquers out there who can read my essay right now?</p>