Anyone interested in reviewing my personal statement in response to the "perfectly content" prompt?

College Essays
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<p>I've gotten some good critiques on it, but there are areas that feel partially underdeveloped within the essay, and I would love some help in determining the overall impression that it gives.</p>

<p>It's written on martial arts.</p>

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<p>Anyone?</p>

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<p>Sure send it over.</p>

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<p>I’ll be glad to read it.</p>

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<p>Anyone else?</p>

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<p>B1</p>