<p>my parents think it sux period.
they're saying that the long example that i use have little significance towards my main point/thesis
any takers?</p>
<p>I'd love to see it.</p>
<p>Sure, pm it to me or e-mail it to me at lemon<em>lime</em><a href="mailto:rush@yahoo.com">rush@yahoo.com</a></p>
<p>Is this a college app essay? I don't think I've seen any prompts that ask about politics, etc.</p>
<p>Or maybe I'm just not functioning. Is the immigration referring to you or a family member immigrating to America?
(now I feel stupid...or maybe I don't have to?)</p>
<p>I am an immigrant, too. Maybe I can give you some inputs based on my personal experience.</p>
<p>I'd love to.</p>
<p>sure send it over here</p>