Anyone want to critique an essay?

[xo_akhila_ox]

<p>Send it to me, i can definitely help :)</p>

[ellemae88]

<p>i would love to give you some feedback</p>

[dashella]

<p>And to me plz</p>

[Kjoodles]

<p>Ill read it too</p>

[kristian_rj]

<p>PM it to me and I will try to help you!</p>