Anyone want to critique an essay?

<p>I would like some people to review one of my essays for Ptn. So far I have received 3 feedbacks that are all different. The range from excellent TO "You really aren't sending that are you?"</p>

<p>Any assistance would be greatly appreciated. I promise you have not read anything like this one.</p>

<p>PM it to me. And I'll be as thorough as possible.</p>

<p>hey dont mind, PM me</p>

<p>Your inbox could do with some clearing; my reply is not getting through.</p>

<p>It is clear -- sorry.</p>

<p>I'll be happy to look at it.</p>

<p>I'd love to read it :)</p>

<p>Thanks so much for all the responses. I think with the help I have already received, I am good to go!</p>

<p>send to me, I'd love to read it</p>

<p>yup
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<p>PM it to me as well..</p>

<p>ill read it</p>

<p>i'll give you feedback!</p>

<p>i'll give you some feedback too :)</p>

<p>i'm here if you need to pm any more people</p>

<p>PM me too!</p>

<p>I'll give feedback, Ill get back to you within a few days</p>

<p>hit me with the essay</p>

<p>I've never done this before but I'll give it a read over if you would like. I'll try to give some constructive criticism.</p>

<p>pm it to me ill be glad to critique</p>