Who wants to critique my Princeton essay?

Colleges and Universities A-Z Princeton University
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<p>Leave your e-mail so I can send it to you. It's the common app essay, but I wrote two and need advice for which is better for Princeton and what I need to improve.</p>

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<p>bumppppppp</p>

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<p>I’m probably less qualified than you are, but I’ll just point out anything that I find glaringly bad or any grammatical mistakes that you may have missed.</p>

<p><a href="mailto:tScandycanes@Gmail.com">tScandycanes@Gmail.com</a></p>

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<p>sure, just PM me! i’ll give feedback.</p>

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<p>Sure I’ll look it over;
E-mail me at <a href=“mailto:NKunkel@ucsd.edu”>NKunkel@ucsd.edu</a> or pm me.</p>

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<p>Edited the essay, now I need some more readers. any takers?</p>

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<p>sure- <a href="mailto:lucyfchen@yahoo.com">lucyfchen@yahoo.com</a></p>

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<p>I would be happy to read and give critiques. If you want, just PM me. :)</p>

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<p>I’ll take a look.</p>

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<p>you can PM it to me.</p>

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<p>I’m a college student. PM it to me and I’ll give you feedback.</p>

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<p>pm it to me and you’ll get an international’s feedback</p>

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<p>anyone else?</p>

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<p>I will be applying to Princeton as well, so if this does not bother you, I will be happy to read and comment.
Julia</p>

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<p>I’d be willing to edit, I do it for our school newspaper, you can pm it over it you’d like.</p>

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<p><a href="mailto:levistel@gmail.com">levistel@gmail.com</a>
editor-in-chief of my school’s paper here, would be delighted to read through it :)</p>

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<p>I’d be happy to give you another opinion, if you need it.
g<em>u</em>i<em>d</em>o<em>v</em>s<em>k</em><a href="mailto:i@googlemail.com">i@googlemail.com</a> (remove *)</p>

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<p>Sure I’ll give it a look mate.</p>

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<p>hey, im an international with no relations to us uni system whatsoever, could you please have a look at mine too?! i dunno can i just post it here, theres two + the short answer, so two with around 500 and one 150 words essay… thanks for eeach and every reply, i love how everyone is so helpful around here ^^</p>

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<p>I’ve already applied to Yale and not interested in Princeton so I believe I can provide a relatively nonthreatening offer</p>

<p>PM me! I’ll be happy to read</p>