Anyone want to critque my essay?

College Essays
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<p>I'm not a great writer so I need some help.</p>

<p>Please anyone? I would appreciate it very much :D</p>

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<p>^Bump, does anyone want to help?</p>

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<p>pm me i can help</p>

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<p>I'll take a look at it.</p>

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<p>Thanks guy, anyone else want to help as well. I can take the heat... :P</p>

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<p>ill look at it if you want, email it to me: <a href="mailto:narcissa09@gmail.com">narcissa09@gmail.com</a></p>

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<p>PM it to me and i'll give quick feedback.</p>

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<p>PM it to me.</p>

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<p>i will, pm it to me or send it to <a href="mailto:angelmonicaw@yahoo.com">angelmonicaw@yahoo.com</a></p>

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<p>I will take a look.</p>

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<p>I’ll try, <a href=“mailto:zlkv9@mail.missouri.edu”>zlkv9@mail.missouri.edu</a></p>