<p>Title says it all. My main concerns is that it might be a little laundry listy or that it doesn't show why Penn above all other schools, but I feel like its a good essay.</p>
<p>Ill give it a look, if you wanna give mine a critique as well. Pm me your essay man.</p>
<p>I have a lot of experience with Penn Admissions.<br>
Be happy to look at your essay if you send it thru the private message cc email.</p>
<p>Also please include the average number of applicants from your high school that are accepted per year by Penn.</p>
<p>rads4cure, mind looking at mine if you have a moment?</p>
<p>send a pm, i’ll take a look.</p>
<p>I’ll read it over for you.</p>
<p>id be willing to take a look at it.
penn ed 2015 here</p>
<p>Sure Pm me!</p>
<p>Make sure the people you’re sending it to are trustworthy, OP. :)</p>
<p>Sure, I’ll look at it to if you want</p>
<p>I can look at it too if you are still looking for more feedback.</p>
<p>Send it over I’ll take a look</p>
<p>I know you have alot of offers, but just in case you need more, I am available for help.</p>