Anyone want to read my why penn essay?

Colleges and Universities A-Z University of Pennsylvania
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<p>Anyone want to read it, its 2 pages long. I love penn and wrote alot. Um no fellow 2013'ers applying Rd, but its ok if you got in Ed already. thanks.</p>

<p>anyone?</p>

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<p>bump? 10char</p>

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<p>Ill take a look, I got in ED, what school are you applying to?</p>

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<p>send it over!</p>

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<p>I'll be glad to critique it if you want.</p>

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<p>I'll give it a read. PM it to me. I'm applying for transfer.</p>

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<p>thanks guys :)</p>

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<p>im in, pm me?</p>

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<p>yeh sure, send me a pm - i edited all my friends' essays haha</p>

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<p>Sure; PM me.</p>

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<p>Sure! Count me in.</p>

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<p>You generally don't want to write too much in these essays... one full page is probably more than enough. They want to see how well you can convey the information and how precise you can be without over-doing it. I wouldn't suggest more than 800 words.</p>

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<p>i would send it but half teh people i sent to on the list havent replied and i am afraid my essay was stolen, so please unless ur not applying to penn or not in 09 i would really like to have my essay critiqued</p>

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<p>I'll check it out. I got into CAS ED.</p>

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<p>I'll help critique it. Hopefully your essay hasn't been stolen and the people just got lazy. But you probably shouldn't trust people with < 100 posts. =/</p>

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<p>i sent it to aijek, house, and resox girl about 1 week ago and didnget get any sort of reply from all 3. i really hope they didnt decide to use it.... ok hipster i will send it to you</p>

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<p>i'll help you out too</p>

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<p>i can help :D
(not applying to upenn)</p>

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<p>i can take a look (I'm not a Senior)</p>

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<p>I will be glad to take a look at it too. Send it to me and I'll comment on it.</p>