Anyone willing to proofread my CommonApp Essay?

Applying to College Common and Coalition Application
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<p>Hello! I wrote my essay on the prompt: Evaluate a significant experience, achievement, risk you have taken, or ethical dilemma you have faced and its impact on you. Much help is appreciated! If you are willing to proofread it, please private message me. Thank you! :)</p>

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<p>Yeah, sure. Just PM me.</p>

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<p>yeah, you can PM me, too</p>

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<p>YA PM me it</p>