Anyone willing to read my common app essay? (applying to Ivies)

Applying to College Common and Coalition Application
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<p>Is anybody willing to read it before I send it off. I just want some outside opinions and critique. Thank you!</p>

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<p>Thank for the views, but does anybody want to read it? I think you’ll enjoy it at least.</p>

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<p>Yes PM me :)</p>

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<p>Bump 10 char</p>

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<p>Sure, PM me.</p>

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<p>PM me! I’d be happy to help.</p>

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<p>Sure, PM it over :)</p>

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<p>I’ll be happy to have a look :)</p>

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<p>Sure, let’s see it.</p>

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<p>bump 10 char</p>

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<p>Sure I´ll take a look :slight_smile: Pm me.</p>

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<p>sure, just pm me :D</p>

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<p>Sure pm me and i will reply back with my opinion but keep in mind that it should not be more than 500 characters and less than 250</p>