Anyone willing to read my Ivy Common App Essay?

College Essays
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<p>Was hoping people would read and critique it. I don't need grammar critique. I will fix it up. I just need critique on the concept/flow/etc. Thanks :)</p>

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<p>I’d be glad to help you out :)</p>

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<p>I can, but you do you want me to ignore the grammar altogether, or focus on the others while noting the grammar?</p>

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<p>I will! :slight_smile: Private message me!</p>

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<p>i will take one for the team?</p>

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<p>I would like to help you out as well. I absolutely enjoy commenting literary works :)</p>

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<p>I will, if you wish! :)</p>

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<p>I will - please private message me :)</p>

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<p>Done, hope you have found my corrections insightful.</p>

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<p>Send it over and I’ll take a look at it.</p>

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<p>ill help u out! pm me :)</p>

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<p>I can read it if you want. Im done with my essay and am very proud of it.</p>

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<p>Sure, just PM me.</p>

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<p>I am available ;)</p>