Ivy League Common App Essay. Anyone kind enough to read?

College Essays
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<p>Hello, would anyone be kind enough to read my common app essay (mostly targeted towards Ivy League schools)?</p>

<p>If you would like to, please post a simple comment and I will pm it to you shortly.</p>

<p>Thanks a bunch!</p>

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<p>Sure, I’ll take a look at it. PM it over.</p>

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<p>PM me. I will take a look. Don’t be hurt if I am too critical.</p>

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<p>PM it over I’ve read a lot lol</p>

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<p>I’ll read it too. PM it to me.</p>

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<p>I’ll read it and give advice…PM it to me.</p>

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<p>Sure I’ll read it.</p>

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<p>I’ll read it</p>

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<p>I can review</p>

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<p>I’ll read it.</p>

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<p>PM me : ) i’ll give u an advice</p>

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<p>I would be happy to take a look.</p>

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<p>pm it over, I love editing lol</p>

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<p>If you don’t have enough already, PM me</p>

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<p>I’ll send you my comments after I read it. PM it</p>

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<p>I’ll read it if you still need people to edit =)</p>

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<p>If you still need help, pm me.</p>

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<p>pm it over mate</p>

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<p>I’ll critique it.</p>

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<p>your essay can get stolen. don’t send it to just anybody</p>