<p>I need honest feedback from you. Tell me what you think about my personal statement/ how i should revise it to make it as great as possible. Feel free to criticize and be harsh, i need it :)
I appreciate all your responses.</p>
<p>Thank you again.</p>
<p>i would prefer no 09ers or at least not ppl who are applying to UCs.
if you are, just tell me please.
Thanks ;)</p>
<p>i would be happy to read it and provide honest feed back
PM me</p>
<p>sure thing, im 09 but no UCs</p>
<p>I'd love to read it. Sounds interesting.</p>
<p>I wanna read it!</p>
<p>yes, I surely will but just be warned, I may be TOO critical. I've applied to Rice and will be applying to Emory and Vanderbilt provided I dont get in. Besides mine are finished and really good too</p>
<p>Sure, I can read it.</p>
<p>I'd be happy to read it... if youre worried about people stealing your essay feel free to email me at my school account
<a href="mailto:sxkamboj@ucdavis.edu">sxkamboj@ucdavis.edu</a></p>
<p>Sure, I would love to read it and provide you some feedback. PM it to me! Thanks.</p>