Anyone willing to review my U Penn supplemental essay?

College Essays
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<p>Hey everyone,</p>

<p>How's it going? I just finished my U Penn supplement essay which I've run by a few friends and they claim it looks good. Anyone willing to review it further?</p>

<p>Any help is much appreciated! Thanks for taking the time to read this.</p>

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<p>sure thing</p>

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<p>I’ll do it!!</p>

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<p>BUMP :)</p>

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<p>I will be happy to review it for you. </p>

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<p>I’ll take a look. </p>

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<p>send it over!</p>

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<p>I’d love it, but don’t send it to all of these people. A few I recognize as current HS seniors. Some have less than 100 posts. </p>

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<p>@noel597 People have to build their way up to 100 posts right :)? It’s not really fair to judge someone’s helpfulness based on the amount of posts they have or their grade level. Their level of critical thinking should be the judging factor, don’t you think? @DonOfAll97‌ If you haven’t already got some help, I’d be willing to read over, and critique, your essay for you.</p>

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<p>I can take a look!</p>

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<p>@BrownBound444‌ I’m saying that people with very few posts may be creating an account, posing as a college student or adult (when they are actually a high school student) so that they can get other people’s essays! Everyone should just be careful online :)</p>

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<p>:) We’re on the same page about that! @noel597‌ </p>

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<p>Thanks for the advice everyone! I’ll be sure to take care.</p>

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<p>Hey - If you still need help - You can run it by me. I love editing stuff. </p>