<p>I have composed an essay I am waiting to submit to a couple of schools I am applying to. I graduated high school a few years ago, and am looking for a mature member (someone particular good with grammer and punctuation) who would be willing to proof-read my essay for me. I appreciate anyone willing to take the time to help me out. I know it is normally advised for a family member or friend to do it but being deployed has left me with limited options. I don't get easily offended so I'm very open to constructive criticism.</p>
<p>In addition to grammar and punctuation, I need some people who are willing to critique my essay as well. This is the first admissions essay I have ever written, so any kind of input would be greatly appreciated as I have no idea what colleges are looking for. Thank you!</p>
<p>I’ll take a look if you would like me to! I have looked over 30+ college essays, and everyone seems happy with my comments/edits :)</p>
<p>send me an email with your essay as an attachment. <a href="mailto:missmibster@yahoo.com">missmibster@yahoo.com</a></p>
<p>I’ll give you feedback. PM!</p>
<p>Anyone else willing to give some input?</p>