Attention Essay Critics...help?

[dustbowl_collegepicker]

<p>I'm applying SCEA for Stanford. Would anyone be so kind to take a look at my essay and critique it? The essay topic is about a picture that has the most meaning to me. Your help would be greatly appreciated. Thanks in advance.</p>

[icedkiwis]

<p>Surely, just pm me your essay if you want advice/feedback</p>

[CC_Admin]

<p>Sure, just pm me your essay too and I'd be willing to look at it.</p>

[parikhs]

<p>Pm me it :)</p>

[starry]

<p>sure thing!</p>

[Jhg888]

<p>i might have time tomorrow in case youd like some brief comments perhaps</p>

[cookie_m0nster]

<p>sure thing, i'll read it!</p>

[rExRuN467]

<p>ill give it a read</p>

[Joethemole]

<p>hit me with the essay</p>

[1337hax0r]

<p>I'll critique it to the best of my ability, just pm me it please.</p>

[dustbowl_collegepicker]

<p>:D bumpity bump</p>

[SweetestSith]

<p>Sure, hit me</p>

[adimeola14]

<p>Id be able to help.</p>

[stevenlee87]

<p>all right. bring it on!</p>

[cookie_m0nster]

<p>you can just pm it to me</p>

[dustbowl_collegepicker]

<p>Thanks for the feedback everyone. If there are anymore people who are willing to read the essay, I would greatly appreciate it.</p>

[gtg_pee]

<p>sure i will. juss pm it to me</p>

[dustbowl_collegepicker]

<p>ok thanks!</p>

[shadowsoujiro]

<p>PM me, I'll read</p>

[seicheong]

<p>sure.. i'll read PM it to me</p>