<p>could someone please read my essay? I've been struggling too much with my essay and I don't know if this will be effective enough to show who I am.. if anyone is willing to give me feedback I would greatly appreciate it.</p>
<p>could someone please read my essay? I've been struggling too much with my essay and I don't know if this will be effective enough to show who I am.. if anyone is willing to give me feedback I would greatly appreciate it.</p>