Boston University Supplement Essay! Help!

Applying to College
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<p>In no more than 250 words, please tell us why BU is a good fit for you and what specifically has led you to apply for admission?</p>

<p>Boston University’s pre-law programs will help guide me to a successful future in law. The university’s study abroad programs appeal to me as a way to gain cultural experience while studying the foundations of law. I was impressed with the diversity of the student body as well as internship opportunities. A couple of the universities’ various organizations I’m interested in are Pre-Law Society and Pre-Law Review. Walking around the campus I noticed the number of students that were participating in school activities and events. The pre-professional advising program would be a great resource to help me determine what specialty in law I would like to pursue. When I visited Boston University I loved the feeling of a small city inside of a larger city, the school had its own community but it was a part of the Boston community as well.</p>

<p>I know I need to add a closing and such, but I wasn't sure if my essay was on the right path, if i should add anything, remove anything, reword anything, or leave it as is. Thanks in advance!</p>

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<li><p>There is absolutely no organization. This reads like a list of bullet points without the convenience of the bullet points.</p></li>
<li><p>This is incredibly generic. You could say this about lots of schools.</p></li>
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<p>Any tips for what exactly I should say in order to make it more organized?</p>