<p>hey everyone, I am applying to Boston University and I wrote this mini essay to answer the following prompt
In no more than 250 words, please tell us why BU is a good fit for you and what specifically has led you to apply for admission.
My essay is 249 words and I know it needs a lot of changes. If you can kindly take your time to read it for me and leave me any suggestions and comments of your thoughts I would greatly appreciate it!!!</p>
<p>My interest in BU grows from my cousin, a BU alumnus. Her intriguing experiences at BU gave me a first touch upon college. As she described the inspiring rigorous curriculum, the vibrant and dynamic campus life, the edgeless campus that blurred into the center of Boston, I began to imagine myself as a part of it. Little did I know how exceptional BU is until I stepped on its campus. It felt like home since I grew up in a city; yet it is a new world with exciting opportunities.
I was more thrilled for BU’s notable programs in my potential majors: nutritional science and business. Both highly-ranked nationally, I wish to enter dietetics option in nutritional science or organized behavior in the college of management. Boston is ripe in internship opportunities so I would be able to apply my knowledge and interests with hands-on experiences. Moreover, the unmatched study abroad rate of nearly fifty percent reflects how BU provide access to international experiences. Along with the Center for Career Development that would start the career advising process in freshman year, BU has the resources to prepare me for a career.
Meanwhile, the diverse student body with twenty percent of international students would allow me to learn with and from classmates who are ambitious like me. Yet we come from various backgrounds so I could contribute to and immerse in the diverse student body. BU is the place where I want to spend four years to grow and flourish. </p>