<p>Do you mind sharing your successful essays?</p>
<p>You mean like online?</p>
<p>I would be willing to email it to you, but if you get my acceptance revoked by using it, by god I will hunt you down :)</p>
<p>Heh, I really want to share my essay, but I don't really want to run the risk of someone copying it.</p>
<p>Private message me, and maybe I'll email you a paragraph of it. Or if I really like you, the whole thing.</p>
<p>But here's how I describe my essay:
My essay basically describes how I overcame the demons of my past to become an admirable human being, breaking the cliche of "like father like son" to aspire to something more than a drunkard. The topic itself may sound cliche, but the events of my childhood that I describe and my style make it an interesting and extremely emotional read to anyone. I couldn't imagine there'd be too many applicants who had the same situation I did in my life, and I took advantage of that to get the adcoms to learn about who I am personally, that I have the personal strength to overcome serious problems, and that I am unique in having had these experiences.</p>
<p>My essay strategy was similar to cbomo's... my mom died from cancer when I was 11 and my sister committed suicide when I was 16... I used an extended metaphor comparing my experiences to lightning strikes. If you want more info, pm me.</p>
<p>thank u for your feedback. :)
i definitely don't want to copy or even do something similar to your essays.
i just wanted to read some successful essays.
if you don't mind sharing.. do you want to add me on aim/msn?</p>
<p>yeah...I know my essay topic, so i'm not gonna copy yours or anything...I just want to look at an essay that made Brown.. can you e-mail it to me? <a href="mailto:jskim3487@hotmail.com">jskim3487@hotmail.com</a> thanks!!</p>