<p>Can someone read over my Brown supplement? I’m applying from Britain so have no help with US essays. I’m mostly worried about the ‘Why Brown’ because I have no idea how to avoid being super generic </p>
<p>Instead of writing about “why Brown”, try writing about “why you”. Admission officers know everything about Brown, they know little about you. If the “you” you describe seems like a person who would thrive in Brown’s academic environment and contribute positively to campus life, I think (I do not know for sure) your essay will get attention.</p>
<p>You may choose, after you describe “you”, to concisely point out the specific aspects of Brown that make you and Brown a good match. Or you could let them draw what should be…if you have described “you” poignantly…the obvious conclusion. Got to be economical with the words, right?</p>
<p>I have no affiliation with the Admission Office and have no inside information about evaluation methods</p>
<p>Thanks @fenwaypark! Would it be appropriate to mention specific professors or courses?</p>
<p>You avoid being super generic by spending some quality time on the Brown website. Read the Brown Daily Herald. Yes, mention specific profs, courses, programs, etc.</p>
<p>I think mentioning specific professors and courses definitely is appropriate. Naturally, the ones you mention would tie in to the 100-word or so self-portrait you have provided. Caveat: I am not an insider.</p>
<p>Thanks for the advice - would one of you be willing to read over mine?</p>