Can Anybody Help Me With My College Essay?

College Essays
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<p>Hi there, recently I finished writing my college essay for my college app. and I was wondering if you could help me revise or even rewrite the essay to the best of your ability. Since I am an Iranin, I figured it's best to write about the presidential election that caused too many problems. So if you are interested please post your email or message me on here and I will be glad to send you my essay. </p>

<p>I gave it to my AP Lang teacher and he gave me 4/5. SO it's not that great and it's not that bad.</p>

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<p>Why would we rewrite your essay for you?</p>

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<p>I meant help me rewrite. Like giving me better ideas and stuff. Sorry that I wasn’t clear enough</p>

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<p>ill help you rewrite it. i just hope it is not too long. pm me and ill get to it soon enough =)</p>

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<p>i’m not going to rewrite it, but it sounds really interesting and i’d be happy to edit it and give you suggestions. pm me :)</p>