Can anyone comment on my Georgetown essay?

College Essays
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<p>The prompt is:
Please relate your interest in studying at Georgetown University to your goals. How do these thoughts relate to your chosen course of study? (If you are applying to major in the FLL or in a Science, please specifically address those interests.)</p>

<p>Please message me if you are willing to read it and critique. Thank you.</p>

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<p>Or just comment here and I can PM it to you.</p>

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<p>I’ll read it</p>

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<p>I’ll enjoy reading it</p>

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<p>I’ll read it!</p>

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<p>I can give it a read, if you’d like :)</p>