Can anyone look at my essay?

[engrishGamer]

<p>For the commonapp essay, chose to use my own topic and I wrote about my hobby of drawing comics. I guess I'll PM to people willing to help?</p>

[sxsepu]

<p>I will take a crack at it.</p>

[itsalmostover]

<p>i'll look at it</p>

[hereiam2]

<p>i will read ~</p>

[coopertemplegrl]

<p>ill read it</p>

[iismepeter]

<p>I'll read it.....</p>

[meow112]

<p>I'll read it too...</p>

[v_li88]

<p>pm me too :)</p>

[oblakutvojojkafi]

<p>I am willing. lol.</p>

[psychicspiesfromchina]

<p>i'll read as welll</p>