<p>Hi Everyone,
This is my second post!! I was wondering if anyone out there has time to look over and comment my common app college essay. I would really appreciate it, and will be indebted to you. If anyone is interested I will PM them! Thanks in advance! PLEASE BE BRUTAL ON MY ESSAY!</p>
<p>Please be very careful in having strangers read your college application essay. Maybe you can have your parents, a good neighbor or teacher at school read it for you instead of complete strangers.</p>
<p>Best of luck to you!</p>
<p>Sometimes it's good to get an outside perspective. There's another forum for essays over here...</p>
<p>I would like to read your essay, and I will brutally honest with you as I have with many other. You can send it over. I will read it and give you some feedbacks ASAP</p>
<p>I will read it and give some feedback</p>
<p>yea i can help :)</p>
<p>I can help if you want me to
Note: I'm a 09'er and IB</p>
<p>on the topic of an essay, I have an essay question</p>
<p>Okay; help me understand Harvards supplement:</p>
<p>Occasionally, students feel that college application forms do not provide a sufficient opportunity to convey important information about themselves or their accomplishments. If there is something you would like us to know, please inform us below. If you wish to include an additional essay, you may do so.</p>
<p>Read it carefully...Is Harvard allowing us to add two supplement essays...as long as they show a different side of you???</p>
<p>I think you should stick with one extra regardless of what it says... too many may be a turn-off for the admissions officers</p>
<p>Yeah, sure. Go ahead and send it, I'd be happy to help. I've won a few essay competitions so I should be of some use. :P</p>