Accepted: George Washington University, UMass Amherst, New York University, Northeastern University, Temple University
Waitlisted: Kenyon College, Boston University
Rejected: None
Objective
SAT I: 680 CR, 650 Math, 690 Writing, 2020 Composite
SAT II: Literature (640), Math I (680); didn’t report.
ACT: Didn’t take
Unweighted GPA: 3.6
Weighted GPA: 3.81
Rank/percentile: Didn’t access my rank, but I think I’m in the top 10%
AP (score in parenthesis): Language and Composition (5)
Senior Year Course Load: Band/Chorus, Honors Calculus, AP English 5, Introduction to Human Rights, Music Tech, AP Physics (got a B-, that was a mistake), tutored one block in my school’s peer-run Writing Center
Major Awards: I got an award where the headmaster chooses one person from each sending town and all the schools in the state do it, Outstanding Achievement in Latin 5 and English 3 (both junior year)
Subjective
Extracurriculars:
- Tri-M Music Honor Society, 3 Years (President, 1 year)
- Latin Honor Society, 3 Years (Co-President, 1 year)
- National Honor Society, 1 Year
- Gay/Straight Alliance, 2 Years (Secretary, 1 year)
- A Capella Group, 1 Year (Section Leader, 1 year)
- Band, 4 Years (Section Leader, 2 years; Rehearsal Manager, 1 year)
- Chorus, 4 Years (Secretary, 1 Year)
- Piano Lessons, 8 Years
- Writing Tutor, 1 Year
Volunteer/Community service:
- I volunteer, but I didn’t put any on my applications
Summer Activities:
- Nothing
Rate out of 10:
Essay: 9? I didn’t like it but those who read it did.
Teacher Recommendations: Both very good, in the 9~10 range. One by AP English 3 teacher, other by Modern US History teacher
Counselor Rec: Didn’t read, probably a 7/10
Supplemental Recommendations: None
Interview: Only had an interview with an alumnus for Kenyon. It went very well, she said she’d highly recommend me to the admissions team and that I’d be a good fit there, but I guess it wasn’t enough.
Other
Applied for Financial Aid? Yes
Intended Major: English
State (if domestic applicant): Connecticut
Country (if international applicant): n/a
School Type: Public
Ethnicity: White
Gender: Male
First-Gen? No
Hooks: None?
Reflections
Strengths: I think my essay showed my character, my ECs are pretty good. While my grades aren’t fantastic, I have a very good track record in English classes.
Weaknesses: The fact that I’ve never gotten an A in a science class didn’t help (and my first A in math was, surprisingly, Honors Calculus), I only started taking more rigorous courses my junior year, I wish I had done better on SATIIs so I could report them, I wrote all my supplements in one night so they were not good (shocked I got into NYU because my supplement was like “Eh. The city’s cool.”). Lack of diversity in ECs, only got involved in the second half of high school.
Why you think you were accepted/waitlisted/rejected: I think that my application gave a good sense of who I am overall (especially helped for NYU, I think), I’ve had a decent amount of leadership positions (which I think helped for Northeastern). For waitlists, Kenyon was a low reach, so that’s not entirely surprising. For BU, I showed no demonstrated interest, my supplement was awful, and it looked like I was applying just because my sister went there (which isn’t an unfair assumption).
General Comments: I’m disappointed about Kenyon’s waitlist. It was my definite-top-choice before I heard from anywhere, but I’m starting to second-guess that (you want the schools that want you). I dread choosing between probably NYU and Kenyon if I get off the waitlist, because they’re so different that I have no idea which one I’d be happier at. My decision is much more difficult than my sisters’ (whose top choices also offered them scholarships, so duh), but I’m really happy about where I got in (and shocked: NYU was supposed to be my “Why not?” reach school)
What would you do if you could do it over again:
- I would have applied to safeties that I love. UMass and Temple were my safeties, and I didn’t really like either of them. If I had hugely overestimated myself and got denied/given no aid everywhere else, I would be heartbroken. So, finding safeties I would have been happy at if I had to go.
- Applied to an actual total “Why not?” reach school. NYU was supposed to be mine, but I got in. I know that this is the best thing to have to complain about, but I wish I had gotten rejected somewhere so I could know where my ceiling was, college-wise.
- Branched out club-wise. Most of my stuff is music-related. I did Debate Club freshman year, but then there was a schedule conflict and I had to stop (so it’s not on my application). I wish I had done Model UN. Just, more variety in my ECs.
- Tried harder. Especially in science courses. My freshman and sophomore grades are all not very good. I know colleges like to see improvement, but I don’t think it helped that I was obviously a slacker those first two years.
- Written better supplements. The only one this actually hurt me on was BU, and if I had gotten in, I’d still choose NYU, GWU, and maybe Northeastern over BU, so I guess it doesn’t really matter in the long run.
- I’d probably visit Kenyon to demonstrate interest, had an interview with an admissions officer there.
- But overall I’m very happy with these results. If I had gotten into Kenyon, it’d be just about perfect (but total hell as far as decisions go).